nice video!
Since you're doing TDM introduction maybe the run into action should be some cut to free map rundown.
I know there are such things. but a 2 minute cut bewtween 2 quad sapwnz of explaining where item are and what routes are the usual ones would be a great basic start. then cut to gameplay!
Well, you jump into map and try to explain things as you play. But a little 2 min prevideo made after the game but put in before the gameplay starts would be good.
Meaning: you could run down the map, show items, show powerups, show usual routes to be taken and areas of the map so players don't get lost in the 20 minutes of you jumping around.
maybe would be better if u stream from ur own demo so u got teamoverlay, u can pause and explain situations and stuff, now ur talking in bit of a hurry it seems.
But I feel that I will talk about different points. where if I do it while I play I can tell u exactly what I'm doing and why. Plus u also won't get what info I tell my team etc?