i didnt like the black smoke for the rocket trail. also the camsmooths were too edgy. the song change was too abrupt at some point. too many ca frags for my taste but besides that really liked the idea of using the ad boards as screen 7/10
what maus said, and it really needs more syncing and some effects. it was also very dark (even for me), but it was sort of fresh and new editing style compared to the rest. looking forward to a better second movie, gl.