going for a metal sounding guitar, you need to up the tempo(solo is fine, but it need to be more "on" all the time) and work on the monotonous sounding vocals. Keyboard is sounding great, but having the same strong melody played during the whole song is not good, it needs to be mixed up a bit. Basically very monotonous sounding and too average for anyone to take notice.
ofc, i don't know what sound you are going for, but it sounds a bit too emo like. which is very bad.
I'm trying to give constructive criticism, im sorry if it sounds like bashing.
I can agree with you actually, it was more like a test song just so see where we are going, and we got some pretty good results (here at least), next song will be progressive metal and I'll be playing the lead guitar ;)
Great keyboardist from a music school band with 3 decent songs at most.
Keyboardists haven't gotten any better in the last 264 years.
I don't mind piano in Metal, or even keyboards really. What I hate is synth tones taking the spotlight with a lead melody unless the song has a major transition of some sort.
I played the bass in that one since we don't have a bass player, I also play the guitar (the black one in the video is mine, but my friend who is way less expirienced is playing on it)
So why exactly would u chose to have the guitar parts recorded by what u say is a 'guy with less guitar experience than u'.? Perhaps he's still better than u :D
We're a band, he's the main guitar player and is good enough for this kind of music. I'm playing the bass just because not a lot of people can do it here, so until we find another bass player I'll be sticking to it.
Still kinda logical to let the best guitar player do the guitar recordings. And let the singer play it when performing live. Or maybe I am missing something?
I told them plenty of times to fix it and even asked that I re-record it but everyone said its fine, can agree there with you.. I'll be sure to play guitar on the next song.
you will develope no matter what anyone here is saying.
even if i disrespect you for what you have done in QL i am kinda glad to see that you go on with your life and do something you seem to love
man i sound gay when im drink.
I thought there would be more people trying to shove their flaming egos down this young boy's throat. Good to see he isn't completely condemned in real life pursuits because he cheated in a video game.
"refreshing" ?? okay, technically not a keyboard, but that's because it wasnt invented yet?, but have you ever listened to anything deep purple? here: http://youtu.be/BamOGaIz20M?t=22m26s
Cheater and his crew?
Loyal supporters on esr?
Bermuda shorts + socks?
Gay intro?
I'd be honest: If you're a cheater and get caught, just GTFO and stop being a little bitch trying to garner some attention or sympathy. Stop this emo bullshit.
That said, I'm not commenting on the value of his music because I stopped after the "manly" intro. I'm only commenting on his sad attempts at attention whoring and his cheating.
Dude, you're fucked in this community. Go rebuild your ego and creds somewhere else. As to your real life endeavors - best of luck, do what you like and hopefully never cheat again...grow up.
Just one thing, he didn't cheat and get caught, he used a 100% aimbot in a match with specs for the sole purpose of getting banned. Then you can argue that he may have been cheating from before or not, but no one has proof for either opinion, we just know that id didn't find him guilty.
-intro could be half as long
-transition to first chorus is a bit sudden
-it kind of reaches the climax very early with that guitar solo after first chorus @~1:10
-@2:24 it sounds a bit thin when the guitar starts to play what the keyboard is already playing.. maybe could have doubled the guitar tracks there