What Bolus said. I'll contribute a bit for the next ones.
PD. I'm working (slowly) on my 2nd fragmovie. It has a ~2min section about ctfpickup fails wich is really hillarious. I would be very thankful if someone send me fails from pickups,I only need a couple. I'll send some of my best frags to ethical if I receive something good.
Usually I don't bother commenting videos that I didn't like at all. But it's great that you are learning how to make movies so I will try to make you see what could be done otherwise.
You will lose the flow if you keep overusing slow motion like that. Only use slow motion if it fits the music as mood synchronizing and if the action needs clarification. In this video there wasn't any moments that needed slow motion. I could just guess what will happen and waited for the action to end.
Also don't twist camera angles just for fun. You don't do that in real life videos either because it looks like shit.
When you get rid of the most beginner's mistakes you should work more on getting better content. Badass games have better content than that. People obviously didn't send their best shots to you, just the leftovers.
Upload your video file somewhere in best possible quality, because not everyone can or wants to use Youtube. I can host it if needed.
If you care about what I wrote then use someone to test your videos before you publish them. I can be one of those if you need.
Thanks for your feedback and I agree on your points. As said, this is the first time I tried wolfcam and moviemaking in Quake, so naturally it wasn't gonna be good. This first episode is kinda an experiment and I appreciate your criticism. I've updated the cfg and got some advice from pecka on using blur/other settings.
I'll send you link at IRC to look it over if you're on, for next ep.
Wonderful! I'll look forward to your following projects. Use hilight or query whenever you want to contact me.
Lokario: Haven't played in 1½ years and I don't really know if I will be coming back. But I certainly am still fan of your quake movies. Great to hear that you are creating another one.
More first person as people said but the third person stuff was still pretty good. Less slowmo too.
I want to see people getting shitfucked by rockets at high speed not waiting 4 seconds for one to hit and then watching the painfully bad animations for the next 10 seconds