I think it was a step better than ok, but plenty of things to work on.
-Config wasn't really suited for a movie (multicoloured enemies and too dark)
-The music, whether you subjectively like it or not, is not suited for a fragmovie
-All the best frags were in 3rd person slowmo - you could have done 1st person replays
+Frags were mostly decent, some were really cool
+No serious editing flaws
+I liked the changes you made to the fx (not the nade trail though, it was too long imo)